Sta.sh
"i heard this story when i was 7.
it scared me, "THIS IS A STORY about the white horse.
there was a wild white horse who ran through the day time
and the night time he ran fast as a bolted, "you see when it owner die it
somehow it free it self.
"he coset trouble for everyone in town.
"he destroy markets & he ate the corn
"the peas and every vegable you plant.
"thr police had enough of him so they had a plan to catch him,
"they used huge nests but did not work,
"they used traps and food but he sill wont fall for it.
"then they scared him into the sea they force him into the ocean,
"he swim and swim but he die in the water.
"thr police were a shame to do it
but they had no chose.
"then later in a week he was back but not alive as a ghost.
"the whilte hores was now a ghost it sill haunted the land on east night
you can still hear him run all night,end
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''now ill till you'' would be ''now ill tell you'' and
''who ran rhough'' would be ''who ran trough'' and
''you see when it owner die it somehow free it self'' what does that mean?
and almost every ''the'' word is ''thr''
''thr police had enongh'' would be ''the police had enough''
and almost every ''still'' is ''sill''
and what does word ''asham'' mean?
''chose'' would be ''choise'' or ''choose''
and ''the whilte hores'' would be ''the white horse''
those bothered me so much.. i don't know if that is your accent to write like that.. cuz i don't know much about english cause i am finnish.. but those really bothered me :/